Machiavelli and Thoreau had similar
ideas about how a man should act and present himself. Machiavelli believed that
a man should be well balanced, meaning that he should have all the good
characteristics of a human being as well as the bad characteristics. Thoreau
believed that a man should have his own mind and think for himself. Machiavelli
had many beliefs about how a man should act such as being feared over being
loved. Thoreau and Machiavelli’s ideals about what a man should be may be
questionable but are also accurate.
Thoreau goes to state that “A wise man
will only be useful as a man, and will not submit to be “clay” and “stop a hole
to keep the wind away”, but leave that office to his dust at least” Pg 278. What
Thoreau means by this is that a man should not be used as a puppet for the
benefit of the Government. He should have knowledge and conscience to think of
his own words and actions. I believe that if Machiavelli were to read this he
would agree because he states in his writing that some men are “feeble and
effeminate, another fierce and spirited” pg 458. Fierceness goes with speaking
up for yourself and not being afraid to say what you feel.
Thoreau and Machiavelli have a strong
opinion of being passive. They both do not like it at all. They believe a man
should do whatever it takes to get what he needs done. When it comes to wrong
doings, Thoreau believes “If the injustice has a spring, or a pulley, or a
rope, or a crank, exclusively for itself, then perhaps you may consider whether
the remedy will not be worse than the evil; but if it is of such a nature that
it requires you to be the agent of injustice to another, then, I say, break the
law pg 284. What Thoreau is saying is that if a law you have to follow is
hurting other people, then by all means, don’t follow it. Machiavelli is saying
the same thing but with a different situation. Machiavelli says that, “Thus a
prudent prince cannot and should not keep his word when to do so would go
against his interest, or when the reasons that made him pledge it no longer
apply” pg 463” Basically Machiavelli is saying that a man can break his
promises if they are no longer in best interest or are no longer needed.
Machiavelli and Thoreau are very similar
in ideals, not saying that they don’t have their contradictions with each other
but they still have a lot in common. They are both passionate and strong about
the topics they discuss in their writings and although the topics may be questionable,
their responses are very close to accurate.
Hey, I know we already talked about your blog in class but just remember to explain your quotes fully and how it relates back to your thesis. I think what would help is if you started paragraphs with a strong topic sentence to lead you in writing the paragraphs and think about how the topic sentence relates. I think your thesis if that they are questionable but accurate, but I wish you would of rephrased it so that it is not as vague. That is all... :)
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