I decided to make an observation about my judgement of people on the bus because I wanted to do something that was personal to me. I wanted to show that in my society I have flaws. I may be able to point out flaws around me but I also have them as well. With me judging people on their appearance and thinking they are rich, I'm showing that the value of wealth and money is of great status in this society. I want to make people aware of the fact that they are making these judgements and it's not good. People say that it is human nature to judge others, I'm not sure if that is 100% true but I do know that it is not an accurate way going about things. Maybe you are taught to judge from a young age by watching the older people around you judge. Maybe it's a chain reaction that just won't stop. This project has really opened my eyes to what I have been doing wrong but also what so many others are doing wrong as well.
Sponge Bob was an idea that came to me after I remember hearing on the news that kids who watch the show, become dumber. I thought to myself that maybe it's not so much that it makes children dumb but that it displays all then wrong messages. After taking my observations in realized that woman were arrogant when it came to their intellegence, men were portrayed as stupid and frowned upon when they showed intelligence. I have heard way too many times that woman are more intelligent than men and mature faster. We are all equal and should embrace that. In this society we should work as one unit instead of putting each other down. In Sponge Bob, all the wrong messages are being sent to the minds of the young children and they are too young to realize what is happening.
If I could find a common theme in all three of my blogs, I would say that it was equality. I talked about a variety of races in one family and they accept each other as if they were blood related. I've touched upon judging people on the public bus. Lastly I've talked about men and woman not being equal in a child's cartoon. Equality seems like the best fit for a common theme. All my topics branch off from this common ground.
If I could find a common theme in all three of my blogs, I would say that it was equality. I talked about a variety of races in one family and they accept each other as if they were blood related. I've touched upon judging people on the public bus. Lastly I've talked about men and woman not being equal in a child's cartoon. Equality seems like the best fit for a common theme. All my topics branch off from this common ground.
I really think this was great! I know, on every other of your observation blogs i said you should have explained what each of your observations said about society and culutre, now i see that you chose a different way to go about this, and i think it played out really well! I like how you explained all of that in the first three paragraphs, and then tied them in a theme, but i wish you had explained the theme a little bit more, by giving more examples. other than that, great job, Bri! keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteBriana: Very thoughtful observations blogs! I haven't watched The Fosters, but feel like I should check it out now! The fact that it's produced by J-Lo is really interesting: because she has money to lose, she can take risks by featuring such a non-traditional family. Very cool. The Bridgeport transit blog was a little surprising in that it had more philosophy than observation, but your reflection convinced me that was positive. Your analysis of Spongebob seems right on to me. My only suggestion, in all of these, is to pay close attention to your sentences. Make sure you are making everything as polished and grammar-perfect as you can (watch capitalization and commas, in particular). Otherwise, great job!
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